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Six Sentence Sunday 10/2/2011

02 Oct

Hi and welcome to Six Sentence Sunday!  Thanks for taking the time to visit me.  I do appreciate comments, so please let me know what you think of my six.  Each week I will post another six from a work in progress or a finished manuscript.  All you have to do is read and enjoy.  That’s it!

Now I have to admit this is my 3rd week participating.  The 1st week I didn’t really know what I was doing and just picked six from anywhere in the book.  Since then I’ve decided to post in story order.  So, sorry for any confusion, as the first week should’ve actually been something I posted in the 4th or 5th week 🙂

This is from a scene in my book Some Like it in Handcuffs which is being released by The Wild Rose Press both in print and ebook format.  Release date pending   This is from the end of the 2nd chapter after Judson (a detective and the hot hero…YUM), meets Sunny (the sassy heroine who is a PI). Her family, all involved in some aspect of law enforcement, have tricked her into accepting Judson’s help on a cold case to keep her safe, or so they think *wink*.  After they meet (the six from last week), Judson is alone and realizes he’s in trouble.

He’d be the first to fail a lie detector test if he didn’t admit he found her extremely attractive, but he’d also be first in line at a firing squad if he didn’t keep his distance. Her brothers were protective. Another detective, especially one that wasn’t planning to stick around, wouldn’t top their list as a potential date for their little sister.

Date. He shook his head to clear that word from his mind.

The case should be his one and only focus.

I hope you enjoyed these six.  For more great previews from other authors please click on SIX SENTENCE SUNDAY.  Or join in the fun next week with six of your own.

HappyReading! 

Christine

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51 responses to “Six Sentence Sunday 10/2/2011

  1. mirriamsmyth

    October 3, 2011 at 1:43 am

    LOL firing squad! I like his uncertainty – tell her, don’t tell her. As long as he’s working with her, the case won’t be the only thing on his mind. 🙂

     
  2. Jennifer Lowery~Writer

    October 3, 2011 at 2:11 am

    Love over-protective brothers! The heroine in my new series has six! Loved ’em.

     
    • ChristineWarner

      October 3, 2011 at 3:35 am

      Six….that’s a lot of over protectiveness! My heroine has 4 and each will have their own story…so I’m looking forward to revealing them. Glad you dropped in Jennifer!

       
  3. Ruthie

    October 3, 2011 at 2:14 am

    Great six! It’s my third week, too. I like the “first to fail a lie-detector test” line.

    “Especially one that wasn’t going to stick around” — should be “one who.” People are always “who.” Sorry, I’m an editor for my day job. 🙂

     
    • ChristineWarner

      October 3, 2011 at 3:36 am

      Hey Ruthie, thanks for commenting and the correction. I have to admit I missed that in the editing of the story…but my editing skills are much more honed now and I won’t be making that mistake in future works. 🙂

       
  4. Sandra Bunino (@SandraBunino)

    October 3, 2011 at 3:25 am

    I love how he is torn between the case and Sunny. Her family adds to the complication. Can’t wait to see where this goes! Great six!

     
  5. Brenda

    October 3, 2011 at 3:30 am

    Freaking awesomely AWESOME six sentences.

     
    • ChristineWarner

      October 3, 2011 at 3:39 am

      Thanks for the awesome comment Brenda…you are just too awesome for words…lol

       
  6. Sheri Fredricks

    October 3, 2011 at 3:31 am

    Hi Christine *waves* ~ What I liked about your sentences is the push and pull of emotion Judsen goes through.

    Another item is I can see a man shaking his head to get his thoughts back on track.

    And a gold star for Ruthie for catching the little error. (she’d be a great crit partner, huh? Grin!)

    LOL No matter how many times we critique, there’s usually one more find. Argh!

     
    • ChristineWarner

      October 3, 2011 at 3:42 am

      Thanks Sheri….glad you liked his turmoil…and you are so right, now matter how many times we look over our work, seems something is always missed. I just hope it doesn’t affect the reader’s enjoyment of the story too much.

       
      • Sheri Fredricks

        October 3, 2011 at 4:09 am

        Not all readers are editors! LOL And it sure didn’t affect MY enjoyment. I found it totally bitchen.

         
  7. dakotatrace

    October 3, 2011 at 3:36 am

    love when a man is torn between what he should do and what he wants to do – it makes them so…human. Great six!

     
    • ChristineWarner

      October 3, 2011 at 3:39 am

      Thanks for checking out my Six…glad you liked them!

       
  8. Lorien Velez

    October 3, 2011 at 3:56 am

    Fantastic six! Love how the first line instantly drew me in for more. 🙂

     
  9. D'Ann Linscott-Dunham

    October 3, 2011 at 4:18 am

    Awesome job, Christine!
    I can’t wait to read this one.

     
    • ChristineWarner

      October 3, 2011 at 5:28 am

      Glad you dropped in D’Ann….glad you liked my Six….I loved writing these characters 🙂

       
  10. Joanna Aislinn

    October 3, 2011 at 4:24 am

    Plenty intriguing, based on six sentences. Excellent, with a great hook too

     
    • ChristineWarner

      October 3, 2011 at 5:28 am

      Appreciate your comments Joanna….hope you’re hooked 🙂

       
  11. Jynnipher

    October 3, 2011 at 4:54 am

    You really captured the should I or shouldn’t I with him. Great six! Loved the firing squad line 🙂

     
    • ChristineWarner

      October 3, 2011 at 5:29 am

      Wonderful to hear your comments Jynnipher….one of my fav lines too…thanks for dropping in 🙂

       
  12. Zee Monodee

    October 3, 2011 at 4:54 am

    Love how he fights the attraction and rationalizes the brothers’ aspect. 🙂 Good job

     
    • ChristineWarner

      October 3, 2011 at 5:29 am

      Thanks Zee….and it keeps getting better…stay tuned…lol

       
  13. jennajaxon

    October 3, 2011 at 6:49 am

    I can tell he’s in trouble already! He’ll be praying for a firing squad if he hurts her and the brothers find out! Wonderful six!

     
    • ChristineWarner

      October 3, 2011 at 7:49 am

      lol…glad you enjoyed my six Jenna..thanks for stopping in 🙂

       
  14. serenabellbooks

    October 3, 2011 at 7:31 am

    Great six! Love the way the word choices fit him and his career.

     
    • ChristineWarner

      October 3, 2011 at 7:49 am

      Thanks…glad you enjoyed reading them as much as I enjoyed writing them 🙂

       
  15. elainecsc@aol.com

    October 3, 2011 at 9:10 am

    Lovely snippet.

     
  16. Taryn Kincaid

    October 3, 2011 at 9:52 am

    Wonderful. Love his inner thoughts! (You don’t need to post in order; post whatever six you like.)

     
  17. Lindsay

    October 3, 2011 at 10:08 am

    Wonderful six. Love the firing squad line

     
    • ChristineWarner

      October 3, 2011 at 10:28 am

      Glad you like it Lindsay…one of my favs too 🙂 Glad you commented!

       
  18. Cheryl Yeko

    October 3, 2011 at 11:17 am

    Overprotective brothers, I like it. I see lots of fun stuff in the future.

    -Cheryl

     
    • ChristineWarner

      October 3, 2011 at 11:19 am

      lol…I think you might be right *wink*……thanks for dropping by 🙂

       
  19. Piper

    October 3, 2011 at 11:25 am

    I love your voice here and how he’s trying to force himself to focus. Great six!

     
  20. Lisa Fox

    October 3, 2011 at 1:27 pm

    Sounds like trouble! Great six!

     
  21. Melynda Price

    October 3, 2011 at 2:02 pm

    This is a great six. Really grabs the reader. I’d love to read more 🙂

     
    • ChristineWarner

      October 3, 2011 at 2:03 pm

      Hi Melynda, glad I hooked you! Come back next week for another six and hopefully I’ll have the release date soon as well!

       
  22. sarahballance

    October 3, 2011 at 2:09 pm

    This is wonderful! I LOVE how his focus wanders!

     
  23. Ryan

    October 3, 2011 at 3:41 pm

    I like your humor Christine, and this six totally has my interest!

     
  24. sueannbowlingauthor

    October 3, 2011 at 6:35 pm

    First in line to be doing the firing, or receiving it? Really good except for the moment of confusion.

     
    • ChristineWarner

      October 4, 2011 at 12:17 am

      Glad you dropped by to read my Six and happy you liked them!

       
  25. Susan S.

    October 20, 2011 at 2:47 am

    Love the cover by the way. When you google the title and hit images it is the very first picture…very cool. The other pictures with that phrase are not rated PG so I suggest this as a intellectual exercise only.

     
    • ChristineWarner

      October 20, 2011 at 2:55 am

      Thanks Susan! I like the cover too and I’m glad to learn that my cover image pops up 1st when googled…how cool is that? lol

       

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