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Six Sentence Sunday 11/20/2011

20 Nov

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Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday!  Thanks for taking the time to visit.  I love reading comments, so please let me know what you think of my snippet.  Each week I will post another six from a work in progress or a finished manuscript.  All you have to do is read and enjoy.  That’s it!

Since starting Six Sentence Sunday I’ve been posting from Some Like it in Handcuffs which is being released on March 23, 2012 by The Wild Rose Press…but I’ve decided to put that story away until it’s closer to release date and will now post from my current wip, Some Like it on the Run, which features Derek Kennedy, brother to Sunny, the heroine from Some Like it in Handcuffs.  (whew, that was a confusing to say…lol)

Quick set up…Sunny has called her brother Derek to help one of her friends who’s in trouble and also just happens to be his one time girlfriend.  The girl that got away…

He pounded the steering with his fist as he rounded the last curve inside the parking ramp.  His heart thudded against his ribs as he spotted Sunny’s late night emergency.

Kelly Hartford stood leaning against her notice-me red car.  Her trademark blood red lipsticked mouth puckered and she blew a pink bubble which covered the lower half of her face.  Their gazes met and held over the curved edge of the billowy bubble.  Some things never changed, like Kelly’s love of bubble gum along with the tower high stilettos strapped to her feet, which caused her legs to stretch to the moon and then some.

I hope you enjoyed these six.  For more great previews from other authors please click on SIX SENTENCE SUNDAY. Or join next week with six of your own. 🙂

Happy Reading!

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63 responses to “Six Sentence Sunday 11/20/2011

  1. Tory Michaels (@ToryMichaels)

    November 20, 2011 at 10:48 pm

    Heh, I like your imagery there with the legs that stretched to the moon.

     
  2. Kristin Conner

    November 21, 2011 at 12:34 am

    Wow! I did not want your snippet to end! I love the description of Kelly. She seems like she could be a little high maintenance! 🙂 I look forward to next week and as always, it is a joy reading your blog! Have a great day!

     
    • ChristineWarner

      November 21, 2011 at 1:13 am

      Thanks Kristin….love it that you love it! I promise to make next weeks post good 🙂

       
  3. Tereasa

    November 21, 2011 at 12:49 am

    Great description of Kelly! Especially love the pink bubble gum image. Sounds like an exciting story!
    Tere

     
    • ChristineWarner

      November 21, 2011 at 1:14 am

      Thanks Tere…This is action packed, so I’m having fun writing it 🙂

       
  4. Lia Davis

    November 21, 2011 at 12:57 am

    Love the imagery. Great six!

     
  5. W. R. Woolf

    November 21, 2011 at 1:16 am

    Very nice 🙂
    “which caused her legs to stretch to the moon and then some.” Is a wonderful sentence 🙂
    You might want to rephrase one of the first two sentences. The way it is now, they have exactly the same structure which makes them feel fragmented in stead of part of the same whole.
    “her notice-me red car” is a great description.
    Thank you for sharing 🙂

     
    • ChristineWarner

      November 21, 2011 at 2:29 am

      Thanks for the tips…I’ll have to rework that a bit :)…of course now that you point it out I can so see what you are saying…lol!

       
  6. Zee Monodee

    November 21, 2011 at 2:20 am

    Oooh, he is so not over her!! Great six 🙂

     
    • ChristineWarner

      November 21, 2011 at 2:29 am

      You got that right Zee..thanks for coming by 🙂

       
  7. Heather Thurmeier

    November 21, 2011 at 2:50 am

    Great description. Good luck with your release.

     
    • ChristineWarner

      November 21, 2011 at 3:22 am

      Thanks Heather…appreciate the well wishes and glad you dropped by 🙂

       
  8. neecy

    November 21, 2011 at 3:34 am

    Enjoyed your snippet very much!
    Neecy

     
  9. D'Ann Linscott-Dunham

    November 21, 2011 at 4:11 am

    Great job! Are you going to post this one on Inks?

     
    • ChristineWarner

      November 21, 2011 at 4:13 am

      I’m only into it about 6 or 7 chapters…was going to iron out a few more things before I do 🙂
      Glad you stopped by D’Ann 🙂

       
  10. Brenda

    November 21, 2011 at 4:24 am

    WOW!!! I freaking LOVE your six!
    LOL, I love bubble gum too, and blowing bubbles.

     
    • ChristineWarner

      November 21, 2011 at 8:13 am

      LOL…I love your enthusiasm…and that you love bubble gum 🙂 Thansk for coming by Brenda 🙂

       
  11. Sheri Fredricks

    November 21, 2011 at 5:53 am

    You have a way with descriptions, worded the way I like. Question: did he pound on the steering wheel? I’m guessing so. You really give your characters depth. Excellent work.

     
    • ChristineWarner

      November 21, 2011 at 8:13 am

      Okay, you read me to easily! Yes, he pounded on that damn steering wheel. LOL…love it that you know me just a tad too well 🙂

       
  12. Gayle Ramage

    November 21, 2011 at 5:55 am

    Great imagery there!

     
    • ChristineWarner

      November 21, 2011 at 8:14 am

      Thanks Gayle, appreciate you commenting 🙂

       
  13. Lorien Velez

    November 21, 2011 at 6:19 am

    Love the visual description and tension from start to end. 🙂

     
  14. Joanna Aislinn

    November 21, 2011 at 7:23 am

    Very good, dahling; you so have a way of capturing my attention!

     
    • ChristineWarner

      November 21, 2011 at 8:14 am

      YAY…my mission is complete! lol. Thanks for leaving a comment Joanna 🙂

       
  15. jayel kaye

    November 21, 2011 at 7:50 am

    stretching to the moon and then some. What wonderful imagery

     
  16. Sharon Cullen

    November 21, 2011 at 7:52 am

    “stretch to the moon and then some”. LOVED that line! Great six sentences!

     
    • ChristineWarner

      November 21, 2011 at 8:16 am

      Thanks Sharon….this is going to be another fun one for me to write…. 🙂 (too bad I’m moving so slow with it…lol)

       
  17. Ascension For You

    November 21, 2011 at 7:58 am

    Sharon ( Cullen) above just stole my thunder….great line ‘stretch to the moon and then some’….Really good six which catches the imagination…well done Christine…. 🙂

     
    • ChristineWarner

      November 21, 2011 at 8:17 am

      Thanks Dave! Glad you dropped in to comment 🙂

       
  18. Guilie

    November 21, 2011 at 9:14 am

    Some things never change… Nope, and I’m looking forward to finding out what else hasn’t changed between them. Thanks for the visit to my blog, Christine!

     
    • ChristineWarner

      November 21, 2011 at 9:59 am

      Thanks for the return visit! Glad you enjoyed my 6 🙂

       
  19. elainecsc@aol.com

    November 21, 2011 at 9:55 am

    I like the description of her legs.

     
    • ChristineWarner

      November 21, 2011 at 9:59 am

      Hey Elaine..seems to be a favorite! Appreciate the comment 🙂

       
  20. Cherie Marks

    November 21, 2011 at 10:19 am

    Love the characterization with the bubble-gum and stilettos that take her legs to the moon. Great six!

     
    • ChristineWarner

      November 21, 2011 at 11:25 am

      Thanks Cherie…these are fun characters to write 🙂

       
  21. sueannbowlingauthor

    November 21, 2011 at 10:53 am

    She seems to like red as well as bubble gum.

     
    • ChristineWarner

      November 21, 2011 at 11:26 am

      That she does! Glad you dropped by SueAnn 🙂

       
  22. J. M. Blackman

    November 21, 2011 at 11:11 am

    She seems like the kind of girl to steal the scene every time–and not in the good way. I love those characters. Looking forward to more!

     
    • ChristineWarner

      November 21, 2011 at 11:26 am

      lol….I like a heroine with a bit of sass 🙂 Thanks for commenting.

       
  23. Joanne Stewart

    November 21, 2011 at 11:12 am

    I love the image she makes. Great description!

     
  24. mirriamsmyth

    November 21, 2011 at 11:22 am

    LOL I love how you describe her, bubble gum and stilettos! Derek doesn’t stand a chance 🙂

     
    • ChristineWarner

      November 21, 2011 at 11:27 am

      hehehe…so true! Thanks for coming by Mirriam!

       
  25. Keri Lake

    November 21, 2011 at 11:34 am

    Everything about the girl begs to be noticed! Nice job – great six!

     
  26. Alix Cameron

    November 21, 2011 at 12:08 pm

    All painted picture, Loved it!

     
  27. Rashda/Mina Khan (@SpiceBites)

    November 21, 2011 at 12:56 pm

    Definitely very visual writing! Enjoyed the read 🙂

     
  28. Melynda Price

    November 21, 2011 at 1:42 pm

    Great imagery in this six. Especially liking the bubble gum 🙂

     
    • ChristineWarner

      November 21, 2011 at 3:14 pm

      🙂 Glad you liked it Melynda…thanks for commenting.

       
  29. Shannan Albright

    November 21, 2011 at 2:22 pm

    Great Six! I want more…never thought bubble gum could be that sexy Lol!

     
    • ChristineWarner

      November 21, 2011 at 3:16 pm

      Makes you want to run out and get a pack doesn’t it…lol 🙂

      Thanks for commenting Shannan 🙂

       
  30. Cheryl Yeko

    November 21, 2011 at 2:51 pm

    Great six, Christine, as always. Very descriptive.

    -Cheryl

     
  31. Karysa Faire

    November 21, 2011 at 4:43 pm

    Great six. Was she a girlfriend at one time or a one-time girlfriend (as in one night stand)? 🙂 Isn’t my humor hilarious? Please don’t hold it against me. . . . . .

     
    • ChristineWarner

      November 21, 2011 at 5:03 pm

      lol…love humor so definitely can’t hold it against you….glad you liked the six…and she was his short-term one time girlfriend…how’s that for confusing? 🙂

       
  32. Ruth Madison

    November 24, 2011 at 2:54 am

    Get a real sense of the characters immediately!

     

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