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Six Sentence Sunday 7/22/12

22 Jul

Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday!  Thank you for taking the time to visit.  I’ve taken the last 2 months off because things have been hectic, but I’m back today to share a snippet from my contemporary romance Two-Timing the Boss that is releasing August 24th with The Wild Rose Press.

I love reading comments, so please let me know what you think of my six.

A quick set up:  P.A. Farah Smith is on her way to interview with Keller Donovan, owner of lucrative construction company.  She’s willing to do whatever it takes—even if it means working for a morally bankrupt man—if it gives her the funds needed to help her sister.

Farah Smith’s palms pricked with moisture as she followed the trim woman through a set of doors featuring brushed nickel pulls in the shape of the letter D, for Donovan.

After all she’d read about Keller Donovan on the internet and in magazines, it should come as no surprise he’d have door pulls fashioned out of his initials. It’d be more fitting if he had his name spelled out, in gold no less. The man’s reputation for taking what he wanted and doing things his way had become legend. Arrogant—one word that easily summed him up.

With determined, yet shaky hands, Farah wiped their dampness down her gray wool skirt then aligned the side seams with her outer thighs.

I hope you enjoyed these six.  For more great snippets please go to SIX SENTENCE SUNDAY.  Or join in the fun next week with six of your own.

Happy Reading!

Christine

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63 responses to “Six Sentence Sunday 7/22/12

  1. Carmen DeSousa

    July 22, 2012 at 8:25 am

    Why do I think she’s gonna bring him to his proverbial knees? There’s a woman for every one of them types of men. Get ’em girl. 😉

     
    • ChristineWarner

      July 22, 2012 at 9:48 am

      That’s right! It takes a special woman to get the job done! lol Thanks for coming by Carmen 🙂

       
  2. Jenna Jaxon

    July 22, 2012 at 8:44 am

    Loved the attention to detail and that she aligned the seams of her skirt with the thighs. I think she’s going to make an impression! Great six (and welcome back)!

     
    • ChristineWarner

      July 22, 2012 at 9:48 am

      Thanks Jenna…it’s good to be back…and I’m glad you liked the details 🙂

       
  3. Joanna Aislinn

    July 22, 2012 at 8:55 am

    Good job creating tension. I liked the detail.

     
    • ChristineWarner

      July 22, 2012 at 9:48 am

      Thanks Joanna 🙂

       
      • Joanna Aislinn

        July 22, 2012 at 10:20 pm

        You’re welcome. Hope all is well with you and yours 🙂

         
      • ChristineWarner

        July 22, 2012 at 10:29 pm

        Thanks Joanna…all is well here 🙂 Just got home from a nice vacation. I hope you and your family are having a nice summer. Did you post on SSS…I can’t find you on the list and I don’t want to miss it if you did 🙂

         
  4. Jessica Subject

    July 22, 2012 at 9:08 am

    I wonder if he’ll prove to be the same as she expects. Nice six! 🙂

     
    • ChristineWarner

      July 22, 2012 at 9:49 am

      You know how those heroes like to throw the heroines for a loop Jessica! lol. Thanks for coming by 🙂

       
  5. Cara Bristol

    July 22, 2012 at 9:44 am

    Like the way you weave emotion/backstory in with the description.

     
    • ChristineWarner

      July 22, 2012 at 9:49 am

      I appreciate your comments Cara…thanks for coming by 🙂

       
  6. Jennifer Lowery

    July 22, 2012 at 10:20 am

    Love his name! Can’t wait for the release of this one, Christine!! Loved your 6!

     
    • ChristineWarner

      July 22, 2012 at 12:44 pm

      Thanks Jennifer…I love his name too….glad you enjoyed my six 🙂

       
  7. Linda Morris

    July 22, 2012 at 10:43 am

    Good stuff! The details with the door handle initials really set him up as an egomaniac (at least in her eyes).

     
    • ChristineWarner

      July 22, 2012 at 12:44 pm

      Exactly…gotta love it! hehehehe…thanks for coming by Linda 🙂

       
  8. Jessica Knauss

    July 22, 2012 at 11:17 am

    Nerve-wracking details, a great setup for the story!

     
  9. Zee Monodee

    July 22, 2012 at 11:55 am

    Arrogant, maybe.. but I bet he is delish! 🙂

     
    • ChristineWarner

      July 22, 2012 at 12:45 pm

      Of course…is there any other combo? lmbo Thanks for coming by Zee!

       
  10. S. J. Maylee

    July 22, 2012 at 1:04 pm

    I’m looking forward to getting to know this Keller. 🙂

     
    • ChristineWarner

      July 22, 2012 at 1:42 pm

      He’s an interesting man S.J…glad you dropped in!

       
  11. Karen Michelle Nutt

    July 22, 2012 at 1:22 pm

    Great detail! I also liked how you set the reader up with what to expect when we meet Keller Donovan, but I have a sneaky feeling there will be more to him.

     
    • ChristineWarner

      July 22, 2012 at 1:42 pm

      You have to go with your instincts Karen…hehehehe! Glad you came by 🙂

       
  12. Carrie Crain

    July 22, 2012 at 2:11 pm

    Nice visual of what she sees and how she interprets the scene. Whether her interpretation is right, or slightly askew, readers must wait to find out. Good stuff.

     
  13. sueannbowlingauthor

    July 22, 2012 at 2:17 pm

    Beautiful attention to detail.

     
  14. Sue

    July 22, 2012 at 2:19 pm

    Love the details really makes the scene

     
  15. Lila Shaw

    July 22, 2012 at 2:33 pm

    Calm (only not so calm) before the storm, no doubt. Sounds like she’s in for a hellova ride!

     
    • ChristineWarner

      July 22, 2012 at 2:52 pm

      And she doesn’t have a clue! lol Thanks for coming by Lila 🙂

       
  16. Paula Martin

    July 22, 2012 at 3:14 pm

    Great showing of her tension with those actions. Looking forward to ‘meeting’ him now!

     
  17. Monica Enderle Pierce

    July 22, 2012 at 3:20 pm

    I like her determination and that she’s done her homework. I suspect *he’s* in for more than he expects. 😉

     
  18. Joanne Stewart

    July 22, 2012 at 3:47 pm

    Great six. You have me dying to meet him. I can feel her nervousness!

     
  19. ChristineWarner

    July 22, 2012 at 4:05 pm

    Happy you enjoyed it Joanne, thanks for coming by!

     
  20. Melynda Price

    July 22, 2012 at 4:06 pm

    Great imagery in how she drys her hands on her skirt and readjusts the seam. Well written 🙂

     
    • ChristineWarner

      July 22, 2012 at 4:45 pm

      Thanks Melynda…happy to hear you enjoyed it 🙂

       
  21. Mae Clair

    July 22, 2012 at 4:54 pm

    I love it and want to see more! So great to have you back in SSS. The door pulls were brilliant, BTW. Characterization through an inanimate object, LOL!

     
  22. Sandra Bunino (@SandraBunino)

    July 22, 2012 at 5:20 pm

    Welcome back, Christine! Fantastic snippet. I can’t wait to hear more about Keller Donovan.

     
    • ChristineWarner

      July 22, 2012 at 6:40 pm

      Thanks Sandra…I’m planning on sharing quite a few more snippets of Keller & Farah 🙂 Thanks for coming by 🙂

       
  23. Cindy Dwyer

    July 22, 2012 at 6:06 pm

    Welcome back. I took a break during April’s A2Z blog challenge and was surprised how much I missed this short Sunday snippets.

    Great six!

     
    • ChristineWarner

      July 22, 2012 at 6:41 pm

      So true…each Sundy I felt like I was missing something and I’m glad to be back 🙂 Glad you came by Cindy!

       
  24. Taryn Kincaid

    July 22, 2012 at 6:36 pm

    Arrogant, is he? Sounds like Keller’s about to meet his comeuppance!

     
    • ChristineWarner

      July 22, 2012 at 6:42 pm

      They’re both in for more than they bargained for! lol Thanks for coming by and commenting!

       
  25. CheryseDurrantAuthor (@CheryseDurrant)

    July 22, 2012 at 7:34 pm

    Sounds enticing, Christine 🙂 (And we know that Keller Donovan will prove to be absolutely GORGEOUS!)

     
    • ChristineWarner

      July 22, 2012 at 10:23 pm

      You know your heroes Cheryse…lol…glad you dropped by 🙂

       
  26. Maryellen Brady

    July 22, 2012 at 7:38 pm

    fantastic detail, had my heart racing with the tension. I have a feeling he is going to be something 😉
    great six

     
    • ChristineWarner

      July 22, 2012 at 10:24 pm

      Thanks you Maryellen….so happy you enjoyed my six!

       
  27. veronicascott

    July 22, 2012 at 8:08 pm

    Always fun when the story starts with van arrogant hero (if indeed he *is* – she might be underestimating him and that can be fun too)…excellent excerpt!

     
  28. Donna Cummings

    July 22, 2012 at 9:50 pm

    This was great characterization — I’m looking forward to more snippets. 🙂

     
    • ChristineWarner

      July 22, 2012 at 10:25 pm

      Thanks Donna…I’m looking forward to posting more excerpts…always fun to reconnect with a story 🙂

       
  29. Gemma Parkes

    July 23, 2012 at 4:21 am

    Great imagery and wonderful story building!

     
  30. Cassandra Dean

    July 23, 2012 at 7:07 am

    Great set up and a wonderful six!

     
    • ChristineWarner

      July 23, 2012 at 11:53 am

      Thanks Cassandra….I’m glad you liked my six 🙂

       
  31. Gem

    July 23, 2012 at 11:43 am

    Her contempt for him comes through loud and clear. I wonder if she’ll change her opinion soon. Great six.

     
    • ChristineWarner

      July 23, 2012 at 11:53 am

      Thanks Gem…I have a feeling a opinions will change! lol Thanks for dropping by 🙂

       
  32. chitsuen

    July 23, 2012 at 2:55 pm

    I’m late, but I could miss a snippet for your upcoming release. And it sounds awesome. Can’t wait to check out more.

     
    • ChristineWarner

      July 23, 2012 at 3:04 pm

      Thanks Melissa…I can’t wait to post more! lol

       

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